Make your post in role play easy bt also creative.

Some will have problems in this. Makeing up storys and being able to get better at it is to think on what your chareter will do as well as your surrounding like a dog sniffing of or the wind is blowing throught your hair. Make them good and long as well as understandable.

I think it will be easier if you plan with the people in the Roleplay first and if someone new joins you advise them of the RP through PM.

Danny was doing only one to two sentance and tihs is for new people and old so they can reviwe it.

I'm just saying for future Roleplays. It will improve how thing's work so much better and it will be easier to expand your posts 'cause you'll know what's about to happen so you don't have to guess.

Don't use peoples names it will discourage them.

im cool with it , but others might be angry if you use their names

Thats true -_-

*looks at shoes* >.>